Workshopping allows you to correct a paper within a group. As a genre, workshopping lets multiple people give you varied feedback on your work, and will probably lead to a better paper. A workshop draft will often look and sound very different from the final paper. A workshop draft is what a paper looks like after writing it for the first time looking over it a few times. The draft is basically just all your thoughts on paper, and in a fairly organized fashion. Its purpose is for whomever is reading it to give feedback to make these thoughts not only become more organized, but also make sure that it is logical, and fits the purpose of the paper. This makes the audience not whoever the final paper is suppose to be for, but the people in your workshop that will read the draft.
If “Essay R” was a workshop draft, the grade I would have given it in my last post would not be so harsh. However, I do have a lot of problems with the paper. As I said before, there were many grammatical and punctuation problems. The style needed to be more formal, and another source is needed to at least have sources to compare to each other. Another thing I would add is to make sure that the paper stays on topic. The writer didn’t really compare the 80s wrestling to present day. With these changes and a few more revisions, I feel this essay would improve greatly.
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